Film Plot Final

For my film plot I have decided what I am going to do.
It will first start with the main characters close up of their eyes closed whilst the music plays. The credits come up over the scene. As the music grows louder that is when the characters eyes open, where she looks around. The camera will zoom out so you can see her face, and continue to a mid shot of her surroundings. That is when the camera pans around to the door where the other character walks in and asks if shes all right, the scene is set as she is alone in the garden, its a cold day, could represent her emotions. This would be an over the shoulder shot. As she says she is ok the door shuts and you see the character breathing. Then she decides to walk out of the house. I can use different camera shots to follow her up the stairs, until she reaches the door, where I can use an extreme close up. As she walks out you get to see the character in a mid shot, looking back at the door. The other character continues with the conversation like normal whilst the main character is confused about her surroundings.
She walks down the road to the outside of the school, where it is empty and quiet. It will also be extremely dark, so this will add atmosphere to the clip. She keeps walking but the audiance get to see the objectivity of fear in the background, merging in with the dark. The objectivity of fear will be dressed all in black. Once the character sees this character she starts to pick up the pace, and the other follows her. She would then find that the person who she thought was a hallucination to be someone who lives nearby. She falls over at trying to run from someone who isnt scared. Emergency surgery cliche would then be taken into action as she gets a gash on her leg, which she would patch up in the bathroom where she hides. She would shout for the other character but there would be silence as there would be no reply. A close up goes towards her eyes. She closes them , then opens them to find herself back in the same situation she was in at the beginning, this time with either an empty alcohol bottle or empty packet for drugs in her hand, which would be in a close up so the audiance know she had a halluciantion. The scene would repeat itself exactly the same, the other character would be in the shot asking if she was ok, as the main characters back would be towards her. The exact same speech would be said, and the same feet camera shots would be played. The characters expression would be the only thing that would change, as the clip ends with her walking out the door and again, looking back at the door and walking off.